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What If?

September 9, 2011
By Mr.ABC BRONZE, Haslet, Texas
Mr.ABC BRONZE, Haslet, Texas
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What would life be like,
Without the smiles,
Without the fun, and the hundred miles of walking distance we've acquired through our lives?

Without dawn or dusk,
Backyard bonfires,
And others with their drowned, doused desires with the lust to do greatness.

What would it be like,
To live without the musically inclined, or the dramatically defined,
Those who surround every being?

And what would it be like, to live in darkness,
Surrounding and enclosed, blindness in an area with no other?

These things make us, break us, and otherwise save us,
From those that chase us, shake us, or otherwise hate us,
A protection like no other, like a big brother of the sorts,
Where would we be without these things?

You tell me.


The author's comments:
This was on the spot, just written from random thought and a sudden idea, a.k.a my "light bulb moment". I hope you enjoy reading it even if it's only a little :)

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Mr.ABC BRONZE said...
on Sep. 30 2011 at 11:02 pm
Mr.ABC BRONZE, Haslet, Texas
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Well thank you very much :) There should be more to come sometime soon :P

fire said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 8:52 am
I really loved your poem.. for a random thought ,,,this is very deep and heart felt..I love how you put all  of your heart and soul in your work... you have an awesome gift!Rock on!

Mr.ABC BRONZE said...
on Sep. 28 2011 at 5:55 pm
Mr.ABC BRONZE, Haslet, Texas
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Thank you very much :)

starfish said...
on Sep. 28 2011 at 5:43 pm
Amazing.