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Typical of me
Fixed at Zero
 
 You stand there, telling me to “keep it real”
 Yet when I look at you
 I see the very image of someone who knows
 And doesn’t try to do the very thing
 He tells other’s to do
 A hypocrite
 And I listen to every word this person 
 Whispers, mumbles, says
 Just because I can’t take my eyes off of him
 
 Of course, it’s such a cliché thing
 The little sister falling for the big bro’s friend
 Who’s so cool, so chill
 In her eyes
 Nothing he does can ever go wrong
 And what a bad influence he is.
 
 Then there’s the best friend
 Who is also a guy
 And always there for her
 And in a moment of drunkenness 
 and mislead thoughts
 he tells her he loves her
 more than a friend
 
 but she still feels drawn to the big brother’s
 friend, so tall, so strong, so warm
 that she ignores the pain
 the agony of her best friend
 she ignores his heartbreak
 his concern for her
 as she goes for the one who
 never was there for her
 makes fun of her
 belittles her
 and for what?
 A kiss here, and hug there
 And whispered lies filled with home

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This article has 4 comments.
Wow, this is really emotional, but I have some criticisms.
1. 'Other's' doesn't need an apostrophe.
2. It's kind of weird how in the beginning you capitalize the first letter of every line, then just stop before starting again at the end.
3. 'Fixed at Zero.' I just don't get that part at the beginning.
Other than that, I truly love the feeling of conflict throughout this! Great poem!
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