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L O S T

July 16, 2011
By Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
29 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
-Ernest Hemingway


The rain is reflecting my sorrow.
Oh, please, let it drown my soul.
And no, you wont reach me 'till 'marrow
When the sky will be all a glow

There are no more angels in heaven
They all left with such fright.
And no these aren't tears i am crying,
It's the rain coming down in the night.

Oh, please, don't save me from drowning.
I would very much like to be alone.
And please don't send for me tomorrow
For i will be six feet below.



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on Nov. 18 2011 at 6:54 pm
paigey669 PLATINUM, Baldwinsville, New York
26 articles 7 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be strong now, because it will get better. It might be stormy now, but it can't rain forever.

this is so good<3 i love it, you really have a way with words.

on Aug. 22 2011 at 11:23 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

I simply don't know what to say... Utterly amazing... you have such a way with words.

Could you please read some of my poems? I'd appreciate any advice you can give.


on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:19 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 367 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One heartbeat."

"Our scars remind us of where we've been; they don't dictate where we're going."
-SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

Anonymous01, this was a very touching piece. I don't think I could ever have written something like this. I think there are two kinds of poets out there. Those who think they can write poetry. And those who can. I believe that you belong in the latter category. Truly beautiful.