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Marks

August 7, 2011
By jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments

You left your mark on me

Inside and out

Inside my heart, just for me and you to know

Outside for the world to see.

Now you’re gone but the marks remain...

Inside my heart the mark is now a hole were you used to be

Outside mark is still there, to serve as a reminder to me.

These marks are here to stay, will you be the same way...

The author's comments:
what my love left me

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jaylw GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 8:51 am
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments
thank you!!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 7:40 pm
TheCapturedBat GOLD, Belen, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
If all else perished and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger.
-- Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

this is so beautiful, and once again i can sympathize with what you're saying

jaylw GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 9:40 pm
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments
Please leave coments thanks!!