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Quiet

August 8, 2011
By Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....


Quirky was our relationship,
Quit was the action you chose to take,
Quiet is how I am now,
Quiet describes anything but you,
quiet is how that girl you treated like me is now.


The author's comments:
I guess I thought of this memory from a book I read and the deep compassion I felt for the charecter.

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on Sep. 12 2011 at 4:11 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

Thank you!!!! :)

on Sep. 12 2011 at 3:33 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i love the way short but also how it's very meaningful. When i finished reading this i was still thinking about the meaning :) good job! 

on Sep. 10 2011 at 6:46 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

Thank you!

Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:23 pm
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
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This is so meaningful! I like how you started all the lines with words that start with 'q', it gave your poem a...well...quirky feel!

on Aug. 14 2011 at 12:56 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
13 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

Thank you!

on Aug. 14 2011 at 3:54 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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The first word, "quirky" kind of gives the poem a... jerky feel. not sure why.

The mystery was very interesting. And quiet!