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Psychopath Parents

July 31, 2011
By JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
It is what it is


My mom and dad are crazy, they told me I was lazy, they told me that I stink and got the hose and tried to bathe me, I said "lord Jesus save me" he said "from what my lady" I told him "I'm a boy" he said "your angel didn't page me" I said "you seen her lately" he said "yes, she's in Haiti" he also said "come on now kid you'll also have a baby, they're not all sweet as daisies!"


The author's comments:
Kids and parents argue all the time and I think what do you expect a parent is going to be a parent and kids are going to be kids that's life

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on Aug. 8 2011 at 10:18 pm
ashleyX13 PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I've made mistakes; not one regret." Alyssa Nicolson

The &quote thing is a technical error, it does it on my poem which is right after this one!! I didn't like the rhymes and personally I didn't like the poem all that much but points for effort! Sorry if my criticism is kinda harsh.

on Aug. 7 2011 at 5:05 pm
-MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field Of Paper Flowers, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"

I found this amusing:) It sounded like a Bob Dylen song lol.

My only sugestion is that it was a little difficult to read. The "&quote" was a little confusing.

But I like it :) 


on Aug. 7 2011 at 3:45 pm
soccerangel9494 GOLD, AMISSVILLE, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"No matter what the weather always bring your own sunshine"

i like the rhyming. and the poem i thought it was funny. but i thought the wording was a little off in the second line "and got the hose and tried to bathe me" but i liked it a lot

on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:19 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

I didn't like the poem very much. Sorry!

I felt like the rhyming was not executed , and that the writing was all just a bunch of silly nonsense and blabbering. You didn't get the point across and the title wasn't fitting for your poem. However , it was funny and quirky. Keep trying !

 

 

I also apologize if I have offended you. I am not trying to be mean , I am only telling you what you can improve on to make you a better writer.