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no control i guess

July 30, 2011
By Tachy BRONZE, Fremont, California
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Tachy BRONZE, Fremont, California
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"Reach for the moon, so that if you fall short, you will be among the stars."- unknown

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my heart was broken wen he left me
to many pieces to pick up by urself
i couldn't move on i just stood still like a deer caught in the headlights.i was depressed and unamused.and i was dumb.letting the world pass me by,i didnt feel it cuz i waz numb.numb like novocaine,didnt know how to turn it off.i guess i justt wanted the past.not this blasted future tht we accommodate in now....i didnt want things to change..wen i changed the most of all i guess we cant control wat we cant.i guess i didnt know the changes i could. i guess im a girl stuck in my own world tht i never understood

© Rebecca B., Santa Clara, CA

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this came to me at different angles most words just said without me knoein if it on the same subject but just wat i was feeling..my work is pretty poor..please constructive and truthful comments
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