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Broken Heart, Lost Innocence.

July 18, 2011
By Angie.Hudak GOLD, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
Angie.Hudak GOLD, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope for the best, expect the worst."
"One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain." -Bob Marley


Hunger, thirst, crave.
Feed, drink, sex.
Boys are driven mad
with the thoughts they create.

I'm alone.
Infinite them. One me.
I'm taken over the edge.
I want to die.

My soul, mind, heart, body
are beaten and abused
spiritually, mentally, emotionally, physically.
I'm done. Out. Ended.

The soul occupying this body
has been through countless Hells
on the verge of light and dark.
Life and Death.

This mind housed in me
travelled though lies,rumors,truth
about to fail my being
been screamed at too often.
Too much.

My heart that lies within
has been attacked by every by-passer of the outside
ceases beating sooner than expected
caused by neglect and uncaring others.
That body that walks strong
has seen it all; from love, rape, abuse, and everything in between
collapses before your very eyes
Perfect ending to a tragic life.


The author's comments:
As you can see, I've been taken advantage of by too many boys a few too many times. It's pretty hard to think about, so instead of thinking, I wrote about it. Hope you enjoy.

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on Aug. 3 2011 at 10:21 am
JessicaShari SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
{L O V E} Why is everyone trying to find it? Maybe it's hidden for a reason...

I love your honesty in this. This is a beautiful example of what so many girls go through but are afraid to talk about, good job =)

Calyps0 GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 2:53 pm
Calyps0 GOLD, Bethel, Connecticut
15 articles 12 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is just a word until you find someone who gives it a definition."

This is beautiful. It's so--as many have said--honest and real. I love it :)

on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:41 pm
Angie.Hudak GOLD, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope for the best, expect the worst."
"One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain." -Bob Marley

Thanks guys, check out some my new stuff when it gets posted on the website :]

on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:29 pm
TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
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You're really good. I liked it! Keep writing! :]

on Jul. 19 2011 at 3:45 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
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i liked the how honest it was and yea welll written keep writing it really helps during hard times

on Jul. 19 2011 at 3:35 am
lovetildeath GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient, & a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control, & at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.
- Marilyn Monroe

If that really happened my heart goes out to you but I like the sad dreary mood of the poem the ne word sentence really dramatize it.

on Jul. 18 2011 at 7:59 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

Good job! I like how honest it is. You aren't trying to pretend that you are perfect and you are writing from your heart about a painful experience. I very much applaud that. Keep writing and I hope your life gets better. I have a pretty good like but I did know some really mean people in middle school and, like you, I wrote as a vent for hard times. Keep it up! Good Luck! :D