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Blue roses

June 26, 2011
By JessHaley PLATINUM, HIGHLAND, New York
JessHaley PLATINUM, HIGHLAND, New York
29 articles 26 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for Life


blue roses show my love

i give as a token

but look deeper inside

true its your favorite color

but its the one i hold

its the color of the rain

its the color of the sky

its the color of my heart

its the color that i cry

so i give you 3 blue roses

one for my love

one for my sorrow

and one just to give



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on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:12 pm
JessHaley PLATINUM, HIGHLAND, New York
29 articles 26 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for Life

Thank You.

on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:11 pm
JessHaley PLATINUM, HIGHLAND, New York
29 articles 26 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for Life

Thank You. 

on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:11 pm
JessHaley PLATINUM, HIGHLAND, New York
29 articles 26 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for Life

Thank You.

on Jul. 8 2011 at 6:22 am
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

I agree. Very good poem. And red is getting over-used in rose poems i think. I like blue :)

Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:47 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
16 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that 'change is constant .'
For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner
If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don't drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

I love the flow of this poem and the way you've made blue a colour of love rather than the usual red ( :

on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:49 pm
Blackmirror SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some quotes I really like:

"Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies." -Aristotle
"Every man dies. Not every man really lives." -William Wallace
"Sanity is madness put to good use." -George Santayana

beautiful! i think it flows well, and i really like it. :)