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taking my life back
June 22, 2011
the sun goes down
i stare at the ground
hopping for my misery to end
the tears and the rain begin to blend
the stars aren't shinning bright
its mostly shadows in the night
i look out into the lake
then i finally realize im here by fate
the water is silent and still
but waiting here is like waiting to kill
i gotta move on
you might not think this idea is very faun
but its my choice
and this time im not listening to your voice
© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA
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Lola_Black GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 6:51 pm
I like how descriptive this is! And the title just made me have to read it. The rhyming pattern was kind of distracting, and you spelled a couple of words wrong. Next time, don't even bother with rhymes and just focus on the messege.
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