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The Pain You Had Caused

May 31, 2011
By ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not saying anything, I'm just saying.

A bullet of pain.
A bullet through the heart.
A bullet without a bullet.
Pain striking through.

The world shattered to pieces.
The world crashing down.
The world to its end.
All because of you.

Why did you lie?
Why did you cheat?
Why did you not be honest?
Is that hard to ask?

You had deprived me of life.
You had eradicated my soul.
You had showed me no love.
Love is too valuable to lose.

Maybe it's time to make a change.
Maybe it's time to do somethinng big.
Maybe it's time to end myself.
And end the pain you had caused.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Feb. 19 2013 at 11:04 am
NaomiPikalek GOLD, Millwaukee, Wisconsin
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you speak right from the heart, and I can feel every word that you write.

on Aug. 24 2011 at 4:47 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I love, love, love he fourth stanza. Keep up the good work...

leafy said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 6:58 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

nice poem! i can connect to it...keep up the good work!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:57 am
TimeForCoffee BRONZE, Chester Springs, Pennsylvania
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I love this poem, Osvaldo! :D