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Her Secret

June 27, 2011
By autumn_meets_winter PLATINUM, Houma, Louisiana
autumn_meets_winter PLATINUM, Houma, Louisiana
22 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bleed with your pen, not your wrist.

Behind closed eyes
I reach out my hand for someone to gab it
Praying in this endless blackness that I am not alone
But I am.
My breaths hurt,
My eyes search,
But no one is there
For me.
Tear feel like knives
Cutting down my face
And no one can hand me a tissue.
My brain is flooded
With visions of my empty funeral.
A priest didn't even show up.
And my mother talks about my absence
In a happy note.
And my lover finds new love
With out even saying goodbye.
So I lay here,
In myself for an eternity
And no one wants me.
My body now turns cold.
I am one of the damned,
Whose punishment is to walk this earth

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on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:22 am
Phresshmen SILVER, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly” -SAM KEEN
"You cant change someone who dont want to be changed, but you can help someone who needs it" -yours truly

Love this, really expresses emotion, and relatable nice job

am2496 said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:20 am
wow! this is great! keep writing

on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:20 am
littlelilith SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Your perspective may very well be the determining factor in whether you pass the test."

Okay, this was an amazing piece! It was kind of spooky, but mostly sorrowful. I like it, and can relate. Keep up the amazing work! :D <3

on Nov. 23 2011 at 8:09 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

i love this. no happy ending, it captures true feelings. you're very talented laina