Breathless | Teen Ink


June 11, 2011
By freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.

The world sizzles
It’s automatic fast
Alone but not
Empty but not
I give myself over
Surrender to the feeling
Another world is entered
A new me is created
I bask in the sunshine
Now it is all over
All I can say is “wow”

The author's comments:
This poem is based on a worship experience.

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on Jul. 24 2011 at 7:15 am
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i like it! short and simple but at the same time very meaningful! its really nicely written aswel, good job! :)