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Human?

June 5, 2011
By Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
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Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
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Keep the will to live for the future is unpredictable -by me

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Person you can be
So human,... is that a mask
To fool me that you emotions
when you dont?
...If so then why?
You know what i feel for you is real
Why must you play with me
like a drug?
I LOVE YOU
Why cant you understand that?
Its makes me
cry in pain
Yes, i'm human
I have feelings
I'm not trying to fool you!
You're not human
i am and ive had had it playing this game
If you are human then
confront me
tell me what you feel...
Human i am and can be
You...i'm not sure
Maybe inhuman is what you are...

© Caitlin S., St. Louis, MO

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I woke up, it includes my deepest emotion from my soul. Where my true emotions are hidden. It's about my lover and I.
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Eloisa GOLD said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 7:34 pm
Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
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Thank you so much FallenAngel1. :)
FallenAngel1 SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 7:28 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
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&quot;Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow.&quot;-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare<br /> &quot;What&#039;s In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet.&quot;-Romeo

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This is so GOOD. Keep it up!! This ROCKS!!! :-) :-)