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fallin past

May 17, 2011
By caylajoan GOLD, Clark, New Jersey
caylajoan GOLD, Clark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Writers become writers because they are
comfortable alone. Out of that silence emerges
a kind of music that doesn’t need screaming fans


In the fall the leaves collapse.
They give in to the cold,
to death.
To the never ending sin,
Just as I gave in to him.
It’s like being slashed with a knife.
Each time it cuts deep.
This time though
I won’t give in.
I lost the hope within,
that you will ever change
So goodbye for the last time, I’m done.



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on Jun. 16 2011 at 4:16 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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I love how this is so powerful!

I am going to look at your other work!

Keep writing!