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What?!?!

May 7, 2011
By whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then step back and let the world wonder how you did it
and
when life gives you lemon, throw them back at life


You tell em the news
The bad news
Well, it's bad for me
but not for you
My stomach drops
to all new lows
It's at the bottom
of Mariana's trench
I'm shocked
I'm numb
I've lost every single ounce of my strength
I don't want to
But it's not my choice
I guess I'm not allowed
to make decisions anymore


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Megan.J.B said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:40 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Here's the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We're exceptional."
- Green Goblin. :)

this is really good! The only linve I felt a bit awkward is the following: "It's at the bottom/of Mariana's trench" Perhaps that's just me but it didn't sounds as nice as the rest of the poem. Other than that one line I really liked it. :)

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:22 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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This is amazing. Another piece of yours I've enjoyed(:

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:21 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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This is amazing. I have no criticism. Yet another piece of yours I have enjoyed very much(:

on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:53 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This is beautiful!  You write really emotional pieces. :)

on Jul. 17 2011 at 7:55 pm
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
16 articles 5 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had."

I liked the well, it's bad for me, but not for you. It's that sort of thing that makes your writing really clever, it's so... Personal? Bahahaha

on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:43 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

It took a turn, but other than that really good. :)