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I'm Fine

May 7, 2011
By whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then step back and let the world wonder how you did it
and
when life gives you lemon, throw them back at life


If you lookme in the eye
and try to find my soul
maybe you'll realize
on me, this pain is taking a toll

You think you know
but you dont
You'll try to know
but you won't

I'm not who you think I am
Don't bother trying to understand
an enigma, let my life be
it doesn't matter if there's something wrong with me

I guess there's no point in wasting your time
If you ask me, I'll say I'm fine


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Megan.J.B said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:55 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Here's the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We're exceptional."
- Green Goblin. :)

I liked the last lines, they summed it up nicely. My only criticism is that I found the second stanza a little too cliche.

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:18 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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Loved the last two lines! Perfect way to end the beautiful poem

on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:50 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Beautiful!  My only criticism is you forgot the apostrophe in 'don't'.

on Jul. 17 2011 at 7:53 pm
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
16 articles 5 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had."

I liked the last stanza, that was really nice(: And the word use of enigma, that was very clever as well. I don't think I've ever even seen that word before :D I like it!

on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:42 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Ending was my favorite part. Im not to sure if i liked the second stanza though.. o.o but other than that i loved it.