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eleven

April 17, 2011
By no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
42 articles 0 photos 93 comments

it's been almost
eleven years
everyone's forgotten
but me
i remember every detail
like it was yesterday
it clings
in my thoughts
cobwebs in the rafters
would things be
different?
if you were


still



around
maybe everything does
happen for a
reason
we will never know
'cos we can't
rewind or undo
i guess i just want you to know
i miss you


The author's comments:
When I was four years old my grandmother passed away from smoking-related causes. I cried every time someone brought it up until I was five or six.

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on Jul. 21 2011 at 8:20 am
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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Thank you both.

on May. 21 2011 at 10:22 pm
MayhemMadness, Lakeland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" Your not ready to live, If your not ready to die."

I Agree totally

on May. 21 2011 at 9:48 pm
Shaniya Marable SILVER, Darrow, Louisiana
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I can totally relate to that poem. Amazing work!!!!