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Unwanted Rain MAG
June 18, 2008
Rain struck the glass
smearing my face
smearing hers;
distorted mouth
twisted nose
smoky eyes
drops on the windowpane
the car pulls away
taking me with it
and leaving her
behind.

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA
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Zelda2h2 said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 11:15 am
Beautiful. Even though it's short, it's too the point and you can feel the emotion behind it.
thesilverrose BRONZE said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 3:00 pm
Wonderful. Great work. There is almost like a whole story in those few lines. Keep up the good work!
LeilaniLives PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 9:10 pm
Beautiful.
rootbeerfloat92 GOLD said...
on May. 21 2009 at 10:57 pm
I got the entire story in those few lines. I really liked everything about it; short and sweet.
Stormy15 said...
on Dec. 26 2008 at 8:07 pm
This is really short, to me it's to short not anoff time to really tell your story but still it was cute not great but cute ;)
conkiemonstar said...
on Dec. 18 2008 at 4:23 pm
Very nice