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Sweet Revenge

April 7, 2011
By basheemadory BRONZE, Bremen, Indiana
basheemadory BRONZE, Bremen, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Do you really believe that what you believe is really real?

Sweet Revenge

Tears that flow
From your soul
Eroding thoughts
In the undertow

Pulled into the deep
Drowning. Wanting. 
Gasping. Seep
Through your callouses

Burning your tongue
Wanting more
Than pain among
Your predators

Drown them
In your tears
For the pain they
Caused and fears

Sweet revenge. 

The author's comments:
Something my friend said inspired this. "Drown the world in your tears. I don't care."
I figured I would write something about what that other person might be feeling.

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deezire said...
on May. 6 2011 at 10:36 am
This is a great poem that expresses emotions perfectly~       I esp. love the first stanza, and can relate. ....thanks for sharing it~