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January 14, 2008
By Lauren Amoros SILVER, York, Pennsylvania
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She
flutters into a bud,
dew-blessed petals mingle
with her breath
flower fingertips struggle to ensnare
this color-dusted beauty,
but her flight
makes this as simple as explaining
love.

© Ashley B., North Port, FL

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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 10:39 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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Now reading this over, I see misplled some words. I apologize! Thank you again!
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 10:35 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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This is aboslutely beautiful. It's also very descritpive. It is like music, because yo wove your words smooothly. All in all, all I acn is that it's beautiful and has emotion and you in it. Congrats on having this published! You deserve it. Thank you for sharing this!
Mandy22 GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 7:20 am
Mandy22 GOLD, Apollo, Pennsylvania
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"True love will triumph in the end - which may or may not be a lie, but if it is a lie, then it's the most beautiful lie we have."

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I loved this poem so much! Great job!
aeppard GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 10:12 am
aeppard GOLD, Essex, Connecticut
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I really like this. so good!
KaitlynMarie GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 4:46 pm
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I thought it was wonderful :)
perpetuallydancing GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 12:40 pm
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beautiful. nothing else to say.
the_Horsegirl SILVER said...
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Gorgeous. It sounds like music.
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
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Beautiful. Love the wording. What more is there to say?
Jaquie BRONZE said...
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This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

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Very nice work. Congratulations on being published. God bless, ...,
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2009 at 1:28 am
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oh wow. That is WONDERFUl!!
marquieleelatham SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2009 at 12:59 am
marquieleelatham SILVER, Bangkok, Other
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a beautiful poem.. magnifique!

keep writing!x
marquieleelatham SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2009 at 12:58 am
marquieleelatham SILVER, Bangkok, Other
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wow.. very short but very deep..

magnifique :)
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 10:30 pm
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Simple, deep,
Pink_Butterfly said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 10:04 am
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very nice, I thought it was beautiful ! :) Keep up the good work.