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February 12, 2011
By carilloony GOLD, Sterling, Virginia
carilloony GOLD, Sterling, Virginia
12 articles 2 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love another person is to see the face of God."


May 15
3:34 pm
That little candy store
At the mall

I turn and abruptly
The world is frozen
In crystal time
Laced together
so delicately
Like a seamless snowflake

It lasts a whole hour
Or a second
I can’t tell

Yet all I see
Are bluish green eyes
Shaggy sandy-brown hair
Skinny jeans
Like the skater boys wear

I can’t see anymore
My blindness is perpetual
If love at first sight exists,

Then
this
is
surely
it.



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KylieK GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2012 at 9:46 am
KylieK GOLD, Mt. Washington, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"To love is to surpass one's self."

Your work is very... Captivating.