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His words

January 26, 2011
By PeepLoveR GOLD, Weston, Colorado
PeepLoveR GOLD, Weston, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"The past may soon choose your future, and your future, may soon be your past." This a quote I thought of my self.


His words cling to her mind
Not wanting to let go
Hearing things that aren't kind
Treating her like some circus show
These words hung on her for deer life
Cutting through her heart like a knife

His words tore through like a mad dog
Shredding every part of her
Leaving her in the fog
Without another whisper
Her tears fell like bombs
Bursting as they hit the ground



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PeepLoveR GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 2:11 pm
PeepLoveR GOLD, Weston, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The past may soon choose your future, and your future, may soon be your past." This a quote I thought of my self.

why thank you reneee lol it only took me a few minutes last year to right ha this is my favorite one out of all of my other ones

 


on Feb. 16 2011 at 7:46 pm
razberri9 BRONZE, Weston, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
If you want someone who is unpredictable, then stop predicting people. - Unknown

I really like your imagery and detail in explaining. :) Nice work!