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Time Of Day

January 25, 2011
By lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

Day is to Night
Morning light
Shadows play
In the eves of day

Dusk is to Dawn
Innocent like a fawn
Seeping into a new phase
Creating a misty haze

Sun is to Moon
A brilliant gloom
Bathing in beams of light
Casting a beautiful sight

Clouds are to Stars
Make shapes from afar
Gazing up above
Mystery is a sign of true love

The author's comments:
This compares and contrasts elements of day and nature with some hidden meaning behind it as an added bonus.

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This article has 6 comments.

on Feb. 27 2011 at 10:13 am
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
31 articles 0 photos 183 comments
love the last line.... "Mystery is a sign of true love" it makes sense, while making perfect un-sense at the same time :) it makes you think. making connections with our own lives to understand the full potential of this poem. Great job :)

on Feb. 22 2011 at 10:54 pm
Jule92xc BRONZE, Smithsburg, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not who I am underneath, but what I do that defines me..." -Batman

I thought it was very vivid, and made me see the things you were describing. Keep up the good work!

on Feb. 15 2011 at 6:17 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
23 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

I loved it! I can picture every detail in my mind. It is very inspiring!

on Feb. 12 2011 at 6:32 pm
OliviaShea GOLD, Lakewood, Washington
10 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind dont matter, and those who matter dont mind" "you know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams"

I love this!(: i like it just the way it is, without anything taken out!(: its amazing how you can write a poem like this that paints a picture, but also has a hidden meaning(:

on Feb. 12 2011 at 1:52 pm
bulldog82 BRONZE, Wauconda, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
i will fight untill i cant fight anymore

i like this alot! it gives a good picture and has clever rhymes

on Feb. 11 2011 at 9:19 pm
XxKittyxX BRONZE, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
2 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your only as tall as your heart will let you be. But, your only as small as the world will make you seem".

I really like this poem it's very, very good. But at the end you could take out the is and it would still run together just fine but either way it's very good :) but very good ^.^