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The Feeling of Pain

January 15, 2011
By ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
39 articles 9 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not saying anything, I'm just saying.

The only thing we all go through.
But there is nothing we can do.
It can be internal.
It can be external.
It can be very weak.
Or, it can be at its peak.
You can feel this in many ways.
This feeling can last for days.
This feeling is just like rain.
There is no way to stop pain.

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This article has 4 comments.

Hotaru said...
on Apr. 4 2011 at 6:38 pm

AHHH!!!! You're driving me insane Osvaldo. My poems look like child's play next to yours. Very good work, all of your poems hold a lot of emotion and I love them.


-Once Again Your Virtual Friend Named Hotaru

on Feb. 12 2011 at 12:33 pm
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
45 articles 15 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream it. Be it."
"Singing is praying twice, and dancing is singing with the body."
"Paper is more patient than man."
"Where you live shouldn't determine whether you live"

Wow. Really scary and powerful, but, like KristyLynn said, oh so true.

on Jan. 31 2011 at 12:03 pm
xxbloodyroses66 SILVER, Huntsville, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Ever feel like life's a play, and you're the only one who didn't get a script?"

this is beautiful. it is like the sound my soul makes everyday.

keep writing.

on Jan. 30 2011 at 9:16 am
KristyLynn_TM SILVER, New City, New York
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beware average women for they will have average love.

I really like this poem. It's so true.