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I Like You

January 12, 2011
By FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory


My stomach hurts,
my head spins,
my mouth is dry as dirt,
and all I can think of is him.

He's sitting with his buds,
laughing like an angel,
eating his milk duds,
his laugh like a bell.

Swoops his hair,
over his forehead,
we'd make a great pair,
but to him I could be dead.

He doesn't knoe I live,
I'm invisible in his mind,
he doesn't know what I could give,
what he could find.

I wish he knew,
I like him alot,
but he doesn't have a clue,
I think he's really hot.

Wake up and listen,
cause I'm telling you,
you're the best in men,
and I like you, I truley do.



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Kay_Kay GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2012 at 5:53 am
Kay_Kay GOLD, Maclagan, Other
10 articles 34 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream your life, live your dream."

You are more than welcome! I really enjoyed reading them :D They were just wonderful :) I am actually loving the fact that you replied to my comment on this poem as i read it again when I opened the webpage and it is so accurate to my current guy situation the past few days! Its amazing

Keep writing!! :D

If you don't mind... I would love it if you checked out some of my work? Pretty please :)

on Jul. 11 2012 at 5:23 pm
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

Oh my gosh! Thanks so much! I'm really flattered you're reading them! <3 I'm speechless really thank you for the amazing comments!!!! :)

Kay_Kay GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2012 at 6:04 am
Kay_Kay GOLD, Maclagan, Other
10 articles 34 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream your life, live your dream."

This is the 5th poem of yours i've read (i've another 6 loading... >_> ) and i just love them! You have such a beautiful way with words and it is so easy to relate to what you are saying. I just love your work :)