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Her First Love

December 31, 2010
By Supriya PLATINUM, Palampur, Other
Supriya PLATINUM, Palampur, Other
20 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry spills from the cracks of broken heart, but flows from the one which is loved.


Everything was fine

Like a relationship should be

Golden moments spent together

Drenched in love

Obsessed with you

Trusted you till the end.



I guess I was mad

For rising in your love

No one did ever knew

How much could one day mean to me



How tough it was, for me to believe

You looked into my eyes

Explained everything to me

Like a foolish child I cried



Full of grieve

Silence went on

Looked in your deep hazel eyes for the last time

All I could see was a heart broken down



Your Juliet was alone

Her Romeo went away

Unable to stop

It seems so wonderful

But in the end there is nothing much, but pain


The author's comments:
This poem is about a girl, whose guy loved her seriously but one day he left the city and ultimately left her too!

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on Jan. 22 2011 at 11:41 pm
Supriya PLATINUM, Palampur, Other
20 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry spills from the cracks of broken heart, but flows from the one which is loved.

thank you so much :)

on Jan. 20 2011 at 6:37 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

wow. this is truely incredible. i love the imagery that i got while i was reading. the sin of a true writer. you are so great. keep it up