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Red Steaks caress me

December 8, 2010
By chocolateluvr BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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The moment I caress it, the warm feeling overwhelmes me. It brings out the warmth from inside me, out into the world. The red and orange streaks connect the outside world as one. As the sky turns black, the water swallows the giant yellow circle. It beaten up by the sea until it loses. And it will stay down 'till it stands couragely from the ground once again in the morning light.

© Barrie T., Scarsdale, NY

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Sunsets remind me of so many different things so I put it in a poem to describe my feelings.
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