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A melody

October 16, 2010
By Hope_Allie SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
Hope_Allie SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
9 articles 3 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Words. Solitary groups of letters, added together to express on page your emotion. Love in ink. Pain in pen.-Paul Putman


in your strong yet gentle arms I sit
we both know that around us thunder

splits open the heavens,
the wind rages on like some savage


animal
yet we are totally oblivious to that
as my head sits in your broad chest
I hear nothing,
but the sound of your breathing,
and the rhythmic



beating of my heart
they are completely different sounds but together the two


join
to create a single harmonious melody, it is odd to think
that after all we've been through
only one thing separates us now...
Distance
the complex melody that once was ours now stutters,

it stops
but now when I need you the most
my heart begins to beat again
the sound is small but insistent
and will somehow go on day after day for you only
I hope that somehow the sound will reach

you
that somehow,


someway
I will be in your arms again,
the simple notes of your breathing and my heart




b




e




a





t
will join and together create our
melody once more
if you can hear my beating,





thudding
heart
I hope that you
will listen to it
I hope that you will follow it



and come



to me




.





.





.





again


The author's comments:
I was feeling away from someone special..it was distance that kept us apart. He was my inspiration...you know who you are

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on Nov. 14 2010 at 4:38 pm
sweetpill SILVER, Hatch, New Mexico
6 articles 1 photo 11 comments

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Life is like a box of chocolates, never know watcha gonna get.















-Forest Gump

Beautiful! Magnificent work....when r u gonna write some more?

on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:26 pm
Hope_Allie SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
9 articles 3 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Words. Solitary groups of letters, added together to express on page your emotion. Love in ink. Pain in pen.-Paul Putman

haha gracials =) ur nvr gunna guess who this one was about.... i wrote it during like PREP 1 summer =P

Dayne22 SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 5:48 pm
Dayne22 SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
6 articles 31 photos 82 comments

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"Simplicity is the ultimate form of sophistication"- Leonardo DaVinci "Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are" -Markus Zusak "I'm just trying to be me... Whoever that is" Unknown

haaahaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiyyyyyyyyy

So Sad really good, and it like makes the reader think that there is still HOPE in it like that even though the distance is there it sorta leaves the message of never giving up on hope :)