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Seashells

October 5, 2010
By Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala


I never could here the ocean
In the colored homes of crabs
But when I held them to my ear
I swear I heard the sound of laughter


The author's comments:
Inspired by fun trips to the beach as a child

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 5:23 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I like this a lot. As ThatBlondGuy said, short and sweet. Great topic, too. Good job! Keep writing!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


on Dec. 2 2010 at 3:39 pm
ThatBlondGuy SILVER, Mableton, Georgia
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Hey, I love it! Short and sweet. The ending is what pulls it off because the reader is expecting "the sound of waves." Instead we get "the sound of laughter."