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Tick Tock

October 1, 2010
By Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

Tick tock as the days
fly away.
Tick tock says the clock
old and grey.
Tick tock as I stare
longingly into your eyes.

Tick tock as the sky
turns to black.
Tick tock as the sun
hides behind the clouds.
Tick tock as you stare back at me.

Tick tock is all I can hear, all I can think, all I can feel.
Tick tock as my heart flutters when you walk by me.
Tick tock Tick tock Tick tock

Tick tock as you get closer
to me.
Tick tock as you make me stop breathing.
Tick tock as you kiss me and make me forget time.

.... .... .... ....

Tick tock as you leave again.
Tick tock says the clock again.
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! says my alarm again.

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece about a guy (as always) during my Newspaper Class. I was oddly inspired by a clock randomly.

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Darbs1325 GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 5:48 pm
Darbs1325 GOLD, Columbus, Georgia
15 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a reflection of intent....love reflects love....hate reflects hate....-Jonathan Lockwood Huie

When the world puts you down, keep your head up!-Anonymous?

It was sooo great. You caught me off gaurd the first time, I read it. Keep up the suberb writing :D

on Oct. 16 2011 at 10:20 pm
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!

Ok I absolutly love this! The ending is perfect! You are a very talented writer! Keep it up! Would you check out some of my work and comment/rate it? Thanks!