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Rock Bottom

August 20, 2010
By ashpooh1108 BRONZE, Daytona Beach, Florida
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ashpooh1108 BRONZE, Daytona Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
There is no try. There is only Do, or Do Not.
Said By: Yoda

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Falling down.
Down, Down, Down.
So deep, to deep.
I can't see.
I'm lost.
I realize I have hit rock bottom.
I cling to walls.
Trying hopelessly to climb back to
life
There is no way.
I'm forever lost.
On this rocky bottom.

© Michelle K., Vancouver, WA

The author's comments:
I wrote this during a troublesome time. It's kind of sad but it was my feelings at the time.
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