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your smile..

September 4, 2010
By Holliee SILVER, Belfast, Other
Holliee SILVER, Belfast, Other
5 articles 6 photos 8 comments

At 9:10 Friday morning I asked myself what is the one thing ill never get tired of?
I thought about if for a while but then I gave up half way threw the day because I just couldn’t think of any thing that mattered to me enough
And then at 3:30 on that same Friday afternoon I realised what it was….
Your smile
And I went home that day and thought to myself
How beautiful it was
And how I how much it would kill me to live without it…

The author's comments:
um again. just wrote this :L 100% true :P

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on Sep. 19 2010 at 5:12 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.

wow! amazing! i know how you feel. a persons smile really means a lot! :)

check out my work?

Holliee SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 8:05 am
Holliee SILVER, Belfast, Other
5 articles 6 photos 8 comments
Thanks so much :D i had a look at your work, all brill :) i love your style. :B

on Sep. 18 2010 at 6:08 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I liked this a lot. It was very unique in that it wasn't written in a typical poem format, but it was good nevertheless (and touching in its simplicity). Job well done.