Thirst | Teen Ink


August 4, 2010
By NinaRose BRONZE, Geff, Illinois
NinaRose BRONZE, Geff, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I swear I never meant to let it die. I just don't care about you anymore - Let It Die by TDG

My eyes
Have turned that brilliant red again.
I feel that familiar burn in my throat.
The flame burns, searing my mouth.
An unbearable pain.
But I supress it.
I deny it.
I ignore it.
This is not the time
Nor the place for it.
But soon I will give in.
And quench my thirst.
But not now.
Not in the prescence of my human friends.
I wait until they leave
To hunt.

The author's comments:
This is just a simple poem I wrote about a vampire's thirst.

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Kaptain SILVER said...
on Aug. 30 2010 at 12:33 pm
Kaptain SILVER, Dubai, Other
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yea... you should cut off the vampire part :P


The rest is real good.. 

Please do look at some of mine if you have the time :)

on Aug. 29 2010 at 10:00 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

not from personal experience I hope? good stuff... read some of mine?

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:59 pm
spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
23 articles 0 photos 212 comments
good poem but me thinks you should cut back on the vampire thing

on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:27 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Very imaginative and well written, but a bit frightening.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:36 am
lizzie.rose. BRONZE, Lake Tapps, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments
i like it, as simple as that (:

on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:34 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg i love this poem! its so friggin awesome! its hard for me to explain why i like a poem but its easy for me  explain why i DONT like a poems. when i like a poem something in my head just says "ooh" and when i was reading this poem i was like "ooh" yeah i know im weird and confusing may be my point it ur poem rocks and i love it :) there much simpler ;]