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Tears like raindrops

July 26, 2010
By DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

My tears are like raindrops
Falling softly-
The ending of a silly sunny day,
As Sure as I must breathe
It must rain,
And I must cry.
So come dance with me,
Dance through the tears,
Dance in the rain

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on Jul. 27 2012 at 6:56 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

wow the metaphor is Amazing! (maybe check out my work sometime)

on Aug. 26 2011 at 9:09 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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wow this was beautiful! great job! keep writing! and im sorry that your a loner! hope u make friends!!! :)(:

on Aug. 5 2011 at 8:26 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

It was a nice and short poem. I loved the concept and the last three lines. Great job!

on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:25 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

its short and simple, i agree! but you can still feel something behind it :)

on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:30 am
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
16 articles 5 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had."

Very nice! It's short and simple and easy to relate too! :D I like it a lot, it flows very easily and is just nice to read! Very good job, I must say!

on Jul. 22 2011 at 11:01 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

This is a good job! So meaningful with a few little words! 

on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:54 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Beautiful!  I love the comparison between teardrops and rain.  And like Garnet77 said, it's short and sweet but it has a lot of meaning.

Kailey4 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:12 pm
Kailey4 BRONZE, Simpsonville, South Carolina
4 articles 3 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Né io pitorre" - Michelangelo

I know this sounds..unoriginal...but that was VERY pretty! I read it over and over!!

on Jul. 20 2011 at 5:38 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I actually really like this! It's short and sweet and has so much meaning! Beautiful. :)