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Tears like raindrops

July 26, 2010
By DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

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My tears are like raindrops
Falling softly-
Sad-
The ending of a silly sunny day,
Yet,
As Sure as I must breathe
It must rain,
And I must cry.
So come dance with me,
Dance through the tears,
Dance in the rain

© Megan M., Ocala, FL

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albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2012 at 6:56 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

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wow the metaphor is Amazing! (maybe check out my work sometime)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 9:09 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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wow this was beautiful! great job! keep writing! and im sorry that your a loner! hope u make friends!!! :)(:
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 8:26 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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It was a nice and short poem. I loved the concept and the last three lines. Great job!
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:25 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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its short and simple, i agree! but you can still feel something behind it :)
Delictious GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:30 am
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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&quot;I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had.&quot;

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Very nice! It's short and simple and easy to relate too! :D I like it a lot, it flows very easily and is just nice to read! Very good job, I must say!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 11:01 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

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This is a good job! So meaningful with a few little words! 
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:54 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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Beautiful!  I love the comparison between teardrops and rain.  And like Garnet77 said, it's short and sweet but it has a lot of meaning.
Kailey4 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:12 pm
Kailey4 BRONZE, Simpsonville, South Carolina
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&quot;N&eacute; io pitorre&quot; - Michelangelo

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I know this sounds..unoriginal...but that was VERY pretty! I read it over and over!!
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 5:38 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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I actually really like this! It's short and sweet and has so much meaning! Beautiful. :)