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just the thorns

July 14, 2010
By beautiful_but_torn GOLD, West Jefferson, North Carolina
beautiful_but_torn GOLD, West Jefferson, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
It's all make believe, isn't it?
Marilyn Monroe


You were my only escape.
The light that i craved, shined in your eyes.
When you held me close, everything felt right.
In your arms, i felt hypnotized.

With every little fight, we were torn apart.
And with every little lie, we fell a little more.
heading closer to an end.
We just couldnt seem to pull it together again.
Almost like putting petals back on a dying rose.
We were left with just the thorns.
and now from this mess we try to pull through.
we just cant grasp it.
Who know, mabe we can be okay, with just the thorns.



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on Feb. 9 2012 at 7:49 pm
beautiful_but_torn GOLD, West Jefferson, North Carolina
18 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's all make believe, isn't it?
Marilyn Monroe

awhhh, thanks.:D i will.

on Aug. 23 2010 at 2:43 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

i can feel the emotion in this poem. i wonder what inspired it? i love the ending; it leads me with so much question that i almost want a sequel!! it takes a true author to be able to do that!

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. this is really great! keep writing!!(:



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