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July 26, 2010
By Calamine16 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Calamine16 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
18 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Ordinary people can do extraordinary things if given a chance" ~R. Limbaugh~
Heaven is like Hawaii. I haven't been there yet.

~Michelle~

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Brave
Daring
Hard as stone
But Mourning
Storming
And Alone

Giving
Glad
Blissful just a tad
But Mad
And Down
And Sad

Always giving, giving, giving
But never thanked
He Steams
And Sighs
And Cries
That is why he is called
Broken Sky

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because I kind of felt bad for the sky. I don't think a lot of people appreciate every thing the Sky does for us and I wanted people to hear a persepective on the Sky's feelings, if it had some.
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Calamine16 GOLD said...
on Aug. 4 2011 at 6:22 pm
Calamine16 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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"Ordinary people can do extraordinary things if given a chance" ~R. Limbaugh~
Heaven is like Hawaii. I haven't been there yet.

~Michelle~

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thanks :) that's so nice!
CassandraD BRONZE said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:18 pm
CassandraD BRONZE, San Jose, California
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I don't know any other way to tell you how beautiful this was. I simply loved it.
Calamine16 GOLD said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:07 pm
Calamine16 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Ordinary people can do extraordinary things if given a chance" ~R. Limbaugh~
Heaven is like Hawaii. I haven't been there yet.

~Michelle~

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thanks!! (those are my favorite stanzas as well)
inkers GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 3:59 pm
inkers GOLD, Midland, Texas
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I loved the first two stanzas. Very lovely! <3
Calamine16 GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 12:21 pm
Calamine16 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 8:00 pm
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I really liked this poem. The rhythm of it was the best that I have seen in a long time, and I applaud you for it. When you think about it, the sky really is amazing. Once again, I loved this piece.
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 11:20 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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This is so aazing!! i culd feel all the emotion!!!could u please rate and check out my work?? thatd be great!! thanks and ur so good!!