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My Fantasy

July 9, 2010
By NightBloomingJazmyne SILVER, Cumming, Georgia
NightBloomingJazmyne SILVER, Cumming, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
There are two kinds of writer: those that make you think, and those that make you wonder.
- Brian Aldiss

The knight was in my dreams
He let me know that he was in love with me
We sat out by the sea
He told me to hold on to my fantasy

He found my hands and stood me up
And we danced into the moonlight sun
In silence until our bodies became one
Both not looking forward to the upcoming sun

We danced and laughed
While the sand molded under our feet
We fell to the ground where the waves became our blue sheet
We kissed and giggled which was ever so sweet

He started to fade
And i started to weep
But something kept me going
He said "Hold on to your fantasy"

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on Sep. 19 2010 at 6:51 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I LOVE this! It's such a beautiful story (of poetry) and it reminded me of the beauty of imagination. I congrajulate you for writing such a wonderful piece. Well done, my dear, well done!