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June 16, 2010
By silenceandnoise SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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silenceandnoise SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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i'll curl up
in the dishwasher

somewhere in
between the

plates and bowls
and you'll start

the heavy duty cycle
because maybe

after hours of hot
water scalding me

i'll finally
be clean enough

for you.

© Emilie E.

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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2014 at 10:41 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Can&#039;t keep my eyes from the circling sky,<br /> Tongue-tied and twisted<br /> Just an earth-bound misfit, I&quot;<br /> ~Pink Floyd<br /> <br /> &quot;Now is blessed<br /> The rest<br /> remembered &quot; <br /> <br /> ~Jim Morrison

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I didsagree with both of the people that commented. I think your poem was extremely creative imaginative and the length was perfect. Short sweet and to the point. Very economical. :)
trigger19 SILVER said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 11:51 am
trigger19 SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
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Keep your head high people will love to see u fall

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I love you crearive it this a good piece

 

AbstractFragment GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:01 pm
AbstractFragment GOLD, Dalmatia,, Pennsylvania
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I dis-agree with Lilly's comment in that it needs more, because I definately feel there is a solid enough argument here but it needs to be more solid. I believe you need to work on some flow, but other than that I olike your style.
Lilly3217 SILVER said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 1:54 pm
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I like your creativeness but it needs MORE. keep working and you will be great