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Alive Inside

June 11, 2010
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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The day presses from all sides
Yet i'm alive inside
It us where i hide
Where i confide

people are blind
They don't see the kind
Hopeful heart of mine
I just need a vine
To bind me to this time

Lost in the past
Dreams of a bleak destiny
I'm looking for the one
Who can see inside of me

The author's comments:
This poem is about being insecure and misunderstood and looking for someone who accepts you for who you are

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VictoriaE GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 4:24 pm
VictoriaE GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
18 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know who I am. I don't need suggestions on who I should be."

This is really good. I like the rhyme sceme you set up. It flows really well.

on Jul. 13 2010 at 7:00 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

as always it's really good:)   keep it up always!  and try not to change too much