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I am...

May 23, 2010
By Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3


I am the friend of a:
Phantom,
A hobo,
And a feew cancer victims.
I am a:
Fighter.
Not a lover.
A unique individual.
Best of all,
I am:
A survivor.
A survivor of a bad accident.
I am a lucky girl.
Just lucky to be alive.
I am ICE.


The author's comments:
My nickname is ICE so that explains the ice part. And the bad accident was a car accident in third grade.

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on Oct. 21 2010 at 6:54 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thank-you. And I am glad that your friend survived the car accident. And I am glad that you liked my poem. Some people say that they don't like it, but it's not on here for people to not like. It's on here to get a point across. DO you know what I mean???

on Sep. 26 2010 at 7:05 pm
sunrise_faerie GOLD, Fredericksburg, Virginia
11 articles 3 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
things are only as dark as you make them.
there is always beauty in every situation. look for it and you will see.
smile; sometimes it's all that will keep you from crying.

*your (sorry, i must correct that error i made)

on Sep. 26 2010 at 7:04 pm
sunrise_faerie GOLD, Fredericksburg, Virginia
11 articles 3 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
things are only as dark as you make them.
there is always beauty in every situation. look for it and you will see.
smile; sometimes it's all that will keep you from crying.

i love this!!!!! short, sweet, and to the point. My best friend also survived a horrible car accident when she was young, among other things. I love her so much and am so glad that she's alive, just like im sure you're friends feel the same way about you.... anyways, love the poem ^.^

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:41 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thanks Hobo Lady...... I miss you so much and I am very happy that you have commented on my work. You are one of the best poets that I have ever had the pleasure of reading work from....... I luvith yhu!!!!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 8:52 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

I think this is one of your best.

on Jul. 8 2010 at 8:08 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

There was one more line I had in here but forgot it. It was supposed to also be:

I am a soilders princess.


on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:05 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

You are so right when you say that some things dont need to be explained....... Thank you.

on Jul. 7 2010 at 11:03 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thank you for your comment. I really like it when people have comments like yours because then I know what I need to fix. I just started writing actually, I'm only 13, so I'm not really all that good yet.... Thank you for helping me.

on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:27 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was soooo good ! Don't stop writing your so good :) Come check out my poems , thank youu :)

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on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:24 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

your poemmis very shory so your  a person of very few work. it's just me but it lack depth and felling. your telling us about you i want to fell power behind those words. im no real poet so why bother lisning to me.

on Jun. 15 2010 at 6:41 pm
xiao_girl BRONZE, Sheboygan, Wisconsin
1 article 3 photos 7 comments
I like your poem...it's stright to the point, short, and touching

on Jun. 15 2010 at 1:27 pm
Rae_Flies_with_Byrds GOLD, Avondale, Arizona
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality.
-Edgar Allan Poe

You are talking through this poem, and I feel like I know a piece of you.  You didn't have to explain with your artists comments, this piece is perfect all on it's own.  Somethings don't ever need to be explained.  Keep writing, ♥Rae


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