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May 15, 2010
By kurairamen SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Invisible.
Silent,
Complient,
Invisible.
Walk into a room,
And no one notices.
Invisible.
If I say "hi,"
Does he reply,
Or even acknowledge
That I am nearby?
No.
Invisible.
Completely,
Totally,
Practically ghostly,
Invisible.
Silent,
Complient,
Invisible.

© Lindsey D., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I do realize that this is depressing, but this one and its counterpart have a long and complicated situation behind them.
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on Aug. 24 2011 at 11:15 am
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that was really gud..the repitition of invisible makes it even soo much better! i have already posted two new poems..bt they are pending publishing..plz check em out they are similar to this..i think you'll like em thanks! :)