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your eyes

May 12, 2010
By renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.


our eyes met
i will never forget
how i felt
as you made me melt
with your love a burning desire
something i will always admire
a love song,a happy ending
something that was always pending
you watched the sunset above the sea
well, to bad it wasent with me
we tryed so hard to be there
but u never paid your share
so now its done and over with
just a dent in our memory
a dent that will never repair
because right now theres nothing more i wannt
then to be the girl over there
the one whom you paid your share
a burning desire
a meet of the eyes
something that caught me and then tryed
you let me go and i fell
i just hope this girl knows well
cause your eyes are like a spell


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on Jun. 25 2011 at 10:58 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

omg that was soooooo good!!!! I can feel the emotions so well!!!!!! :D

renni SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 9:02 am
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

awh! thank you so much =D i think ur comment made my day xD

on Jun. 14 2011 at 11:18 am
WickedStarcatcher DIAMOND, Massapequa, New York
67 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't damsel well. Distress, I can do. Damseling? Not so much."
— James Patterson
"This is the very first page, not where the storyline ends, my thoughts will echo your name until I see you again..." ~Taylor Swift "Enchanted"

Omygosh i love this! it's really pretty and expressive and makes me smile :D I love the first few lines-"you made me melt" it's cliche but sooo cute and fits in perfectly with ur theme :) <3

renni SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 8:40 am
renni SILVER, Crete, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes, that girl who seems so strong, who never lets what people say bother her, who smiles and laughs with her friends all the time, is really the girl who, deep down, is falling to pieces.

i know this reply is like super late! and im sorry i didnt reply back sooner, but that you so much =D

on Jul. 26 2010 at 6:23 pm
I like the last line "your eyes are like a spell". Good job, keep writing. I'd appreciate if you would check out my work ;)