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April 24, 2010
By Saga Blomberg BRONZE, Ljunghusen, Pennsylvania
Saga Blomberg BRONZE, Ljunghusen, Pennsylvania
3 articles 3 photos 3 comments

He Stared Passionately
She Looked Away Indifferently

He Opened His Mouth To Greet
She Closed Hers To Ignore

He Wanted To Make Himself Known
She Wanted To Remain Invisible

He Sang Ballads Of Love
She Yelled Profanities Of Hate

He Wished For A Happily Ever After
She Wished For Nothing At All

He Admitted His Feelings
She Denied Having Any At All

He Claimed To Be A Hero
She Claimed To Be The Villain

He Kept To The Illuminated Ground Risking Nothing
She Kept To The Darkened Rooftops Flirting With Death

He Cried Out In Fear
She Laughed Shrilly With Bravery

He Stood Stock Still Begging
She Paced And Skipped Ignoring

He Reached Out To Help
She Pushed Away To Hinder

He Stood In Silence
She Fell With Screams

He Stared In Sadness
She Stared With Joy

He Saw It All In A Matter Of Seconds
She Saw It All In A Span Of Days

He Let Out His First Sob
She Let Go Of Her Last Chuckle

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This article has 4 comments.

on Jan. 29 2018 at 7:38 pm
AverilRoseHepler SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You can't choose some of the circumstances in your life, but you can choose how you want to live it. - Averil

I love it. You are an amazing writer, I would propose, get an editor.

on Apr. 5 2013 at 4:52 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

This is so sad, I swear that I saw the entire thing like a movie inside my head. Great job!

on Jul. 9 2010 at 2:20 pm
Saga Blomberg BRONZE, Ljunghusen, Pennsylvania
3 articles 3 photos 3 comments
thnks so much ^^

on Jun. 15 2010 at 7:51 am
CaitlanMcMahon, Amarillo, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect the Unexpected - I don't know, but I'm not taking credit.

This is amazing. Keep writing; I love your work!! :)