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but you didnt

April 15, 2010
By haleyrruiz BRONZE, Housotn, Texas
haleyrruiz BRONZE, Housotn, Texas
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i thought it was too good to be true
i thought you would give up
but you didnt
i thoguht you hated me
but you didnt
you were always there even when i was bad
you helped me discover what love is
you are my family
my mom and dad
even when i doubted you
you loved me
you never stopped visiting me
you didnt care if we had to visit in a small dirty room
just when i felt like ending my life
dont do it please for me and my wife
you said you loved me no matter what
you let me come home
and never was i alone

The author's comments:
i am in cps but i have parents that are adopting me i was scared that if i was bad they would give up on me but they never did they kept their word and now i have a real family

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Kpalo14 SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:15 am
Kpalo14 SILVER, Wilson, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You don't know what you have until you've lost it. So treasure everything you do have and never let it go

i love how the poem seems to flow and the emotion you put into your words, very good job!

malgal3 SILVER said...
on May. 22 2010 at 11:12 pm
malgal3 SILVER, Uhrichsville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I shall not condemn you for what you did wrong yesterday, if only you do it right today&quot;<br /> &quot;If you learn from your mistakes, won&#039;t you just keep making them?&quot;

This is really moving. Kudos to you on a very heart warming piece