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Wake up, it's dark outside.

April 26, 2010
By wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'


I bit my lip until it bled,
you bit your tongue until I left.
We went three days without a word,
now three days is less absurd.
We watched each dream with precision,
we'd have stayed, no sight or vision.
Dead outside, alive within,
I held your hand, and that was it.
A dream was all we ever were,
now darling, have some character.
You say you're done here,
over it.
I think you're stupid,
that was it.
A dream we both envisioned,
one we followed with precision.
But we've awoken now,
to this dark day,
we're both broken now,
and I have to say,
if I had ever known,
that a dream was all it was,
I'd have made d*** sure,
I'd have never woken up.I bit my lip until it bled,
you bit your tongue until I left.
We went three days without a word,
now three days is less absurd.
We watched each dream with precision,
we'd have stayed, no sight or vision.
Dead outside, alive within,
I held your hand, and that was it.
A dream was all we ever were,
now darling, have some character.
You say you're done here,
over it.
I think you're stupid,
that was it.
A dream we both envisioned,
one we followed with precision.
But we've awoken now,
to this dark day,
we're both broken now,
and I have to say,
if I had ever known,
that a dream was all it was,
I'd have made d*** sure,
I'd have never woken up.



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XxBVBGRLxX said...
on May. 19 2010 at 10:59 pm
XxBVBGRLxX, Edwardsville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
\"I won\'t believe this lie. I know there\'s something more inside. When darkness is all you see, this is our Sweet Blasphemy.\" -A6

Wow, this poem is absolutely amazing. It flows great and personally means a lot to me. Keep up the good work!!!

on May. 17 2010 at 1:26 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I really like your writing. strong writing.

on May. 17 2010 at 11:55 am
invasion-of-the-asians BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
keep on keeping on

i love this. terrifical lol

meggers SILVER said...
on May. 17 2010 at 9:04 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

lol we all do that sometimes.... i really like its good

on May. 16 2010 at 7:37 pm
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'

Unfortunately I made a mistake and copied it twice?  Sorry about that.

on May. 16 2010 at 5:43 pm
Courtnay BRONZE, McDonald, Ohio
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Sad,but beautiful ......i loved it!!!

on May. 16 2010 at 4:48 pm
Jule92xc BRONZE, Smithsburg, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not who I am underneath, but what I do that defines me..." -Batman

i really like this