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What Did I Do

April 18, 2010
By PrettyTwighlight BRONZE, Greenville, Kentucky
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What did I do to lose him,
What did I say to turn him away,

I should have said no and
maybe we'd still be friends,
I wish it still could be,
I used to tell him everything
and now he's my worst enemy
oh, please my friend to let this be the end.

© Sarah C., Hillsdale, NJ

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This is a poem about a failed relationship with a friend.
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Goober said...
on May. 16 2010 at 6:42 pm
Yes, this is why I wrote this, but fortunately it all worked out great in the end we are friends again, do you want to be email partners?
GiSELA SILVER said...
on May. 15 2010 at 7:00 pm
GiSELA SILVER, Escondido, California
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Oh you were friends with this guy but you guys went out but it didn't work out and now you guys don't talk. Is that why you wrote i should have said no?