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April 20, 2010
By MandaPanda1011 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
MandaPanda1011 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You can turn off the sun but I'm still gonna shine.

The ocean tears me apart,
Ripping me from the core.
The current drags me to the depths,
While the tide pulls me up.
Which way to freedom?
The choice of change,
Learn to swim in unison.
Or the choice of comfort,
Both missing something.
Missing the sand.
Missing the sun.
Live without light,
Or live without feel.
No answer is right.
So I'm taken by the sea,
No one can have me,
Because the waves destroyed me.

The author's comments:
Welll.. Its a metaphore for something bad I went through.

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Apeggy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 12:24 pm
Apeggy BRONZE, Albion, New York
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Favorite Quote:
A.B.D"A Beautiful Dream"

This is a nice poems. i love how you incorperated the the sea. very nice:)