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Hesitate

April 28, 2010
By LaurenC PLATINUM, Dearborn, Michigan
LaurenC PLATINUM, Dearborn, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every man dies, but not every man lives".


No words can come out
not even to the closest
I hesitate
and I hesitate
not knowing what direction to take
not knowing who will be there
not knowing if i'll survive
unsure if I can derive
from this pain inside
I search for hope
and I search for pride
but it seems like everyone's so dry
turning their back on me
I hesitate and I hesitate
does true love wait?



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on May. 13 2010 at 3:36 pm
LaurenC PLATINUM, Dearborn, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every man dies, but not every man lives".

haha, definitely. :)

on May. 12 2010 at 7:13 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you know. i honestly didnt even notice the picture- i never pay attention to the pictures....thats ironic.

on May. 12 2010 at 4:51 pm
LaurenC PLATINUM, Dearborn, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every man dies, but not every man lives".

haha, ironic. 

It's just like the picture :P


on May. 11 2010 at 4:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

ahh. you sound like youre sitting in the dark and nobody wants to feed you. very emotional and very nice. 5 stars captain.

on May. 9 2010 at 10:20 am
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

hahaha....me to. :)

on May. 8 2010 at 9:18 pm
LaurenC PLATINUM, Dearborn, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every man dies, but not every man lives".

Well thank you:)
I really enjoy people commenting on my work. It makes me smile. haha.

& I have a TON of more work pending to be approved, when they are, please check them out! 
 P.S. I love your photography! 


on May. 8 2010 at 9:17 pm
LaurenC PLATINUM, Dearborn, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every man dies, but not every man lives".

It's based on the feelings I had at the time. But I really like it, and I like the way I rhymed it. :]

on May. 8 2010 at 12:49 pm
Quotes_on_Notebooks GOLD, Allentown, Pennsylvania
10 articles 6 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We all die. The goal is not to live forever, the goal is to create something that will." ~Chuck Palahniuk

i love this! this is beautiful!! i love the subject matter and the way the poem flowed. please check out some of my work if you have a chance

on May. 8 2010 at 11:21 am
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I like this.... Kind of sad, but good.