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February 7, 2010
By CarlyDudek PLATINUM, Ft. Wayne, Indiana
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CarlyDudek PLATINUM, Ft. Wayne, Indiana
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Love is when your heart stop beating because of the electric shock you get from a simple smile. Love is no consequences, love is not caring what people think, love is feeling alive and living for him/her, love is when you kno your complete

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They have it all in their hand
The world
The money
The hearts of many
But what they don't have
Is joy
is peace
Is serenity
They have it all
except what they want
what they need
they are not happy
Don't you see?
Money doesn't buy happiness
And neither does pain
Never let your sorrow
go down in vein
because while everyone is searching
your looking for a way
to get out of this hell you call a home
and live
because while your desperate
Looking for a way
your making someone else's life worse
And nobody sees your pain
they just think you're vein
but everybody soon will see
the same exact thing as me
so do your best to climb out of hell
or at least make it more like
heaven
but which one is easier
i don't know
Everybody calls you names
everybody calls you insane
your natural defense
is to get back in the game
make yourself feel better
by pushing them down
instead of lifting yourself up
because pushing people down is just another way to
bring yourself up
with less work
with less hope
with less dreams
and you make a monster out of you and me

© Kyle W., Pompton Plains, NJ

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The people who survive with this are my heroes. they may not act like it, they could be better, but they endure it all and face it head on
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bdawwg05 said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:10 pm
yeah i also never thought that i would like writing them until i actually started doing it. now its like all i do in my spare time, when im not busy.
Shawty BRONZE said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 4:22 pm
Shawty BRONZE, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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&quot;Don&#039;t wish for an easy life. Wish for the strength to endure a difficult one.&quot;-Bruce Lee

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so do i. i nerver thiught i would like to write them but i do. =] its nice to meet ppl that love writing as much as you.=]
bdawwg05 said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:19 pm
yeah you're a good writer. i can tell one when i see one.

see im only 15 but i love to write poems and express what im feeling and just life itself
bdawwg05 said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:18 pm
yeah.

i love to write poems
Shawty BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:56 pm
Shawty BRONZE, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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Great poem!! I really like it. it has a powerful message. I'm sure it opens up the minds of a lot of people. Great work!! =]
Shawty BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:53 pm
Shawty BRONZE, Los Lunas, New Mexico
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Really?? That's awesome. So do I. I'm not as great as this but i"m getting better. I just really Love how you can express yourself through writing. Its amazing. =]
MelanieElizabeth_18 GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 4:29 pm
MelanieElizabeth_18 GOLD, Gatlinburg, Tennessee
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I really like this poem.. I love the message :) Keep writing. Your very talented!
bdawwg05 SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 1:49 pm
bdawwg05 SILVER, Hoosick Falls, New York
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i really like this poem also.

check my work out too.

i love writing and i can tell you have a lot of writing skills
hollyhottell DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 1:19 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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i really like this poem. it is very ture. thats how everybody at my high school seems to be. you should check out my work